Chapter 1 | Page 43
THE SISTER doesn't like this page, and she didn't hesitate to make that known. "This would have looked better with screentones," she said.
But she doesn't draw, so no insight was given.
Days later she startled me when, out of nowhere, she started shouting "That's it! It's flat, that's what's going on! I don't like it because it's so flat! And the bricks are flat!"
Meanwhile, over at Toon Latino all the coments were like "this page is so beautiful and touching," and "I loved the color page."
I'm sad (and confused) x9